tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2161762455502736718.post5326021545217473342..comments2024-02-20T06:08:52.320-05:00Comments on Flaws In Progress: Chapter one of my attempt at writing a novel...mcpiercehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09410357058287434792noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2161762455502736718.post-9667742665996871122011-04-10T18:19:52.191-04:002011-04-10T18:19:52.191-04:00Larro: Thanks for catching those. I've not had...Larro: Thanks for catching those. I've not had anything edited yet, just writing up my ideas currently.<br /><br />I'm hoping to have it written, at least in the same rough form, by the end of the year. But I'm glad it's at least moderately interesting to people. :)mcpiercehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09410357058287434792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2161762455502736718.post-16784093979631053022011-04-10T17:45:28.214-04:002011-04-10T17:45:28.214-04:00Very good. I'm wanting more here...
*foot tap...Very good. I'm wanting more here...<br /><br />*foot tapping*<br /><br />Some typos:<br /><br />"The human race was losing the battle against an enemy whose ranks grew with every one of their DEATHES. And it wouldn't be too many more years before the enemy had ACHIEVES total victory."<br /><br />Other than that I look forward to more.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05071513103184169276noreply@blogger.com